cybesamart work   Today we were going on the cybesamart and you had to make a Audience and you have to go to someones blog and past it then in the squire one and you have to write who you you want to see your blog like i want my family to see my blog so the circle you have to put a photo of your family because that the person youw.

The Monster Under My Bed

In class this week our teacher gave us some story starters to complete for writing. My story was about a monster. I selected this story because it was cool to do it and i felt so proud of my work.  

My story is about a little girl who got really scared of that monster with 3 eyes who lived under her bed. Feel free to read my blog and leave me a comment.  

Mrs Caterpillar

Hi bloggers. As part of our classwork for writing we have been creating cool story starters. We had to be really creative with what we wrote and i tried to be funny so could keep the readers interest. Hope you enjoy please comment.

WALT : Hook my audience

Mrs Caterpillar was going to sort out that family of late children. It was basic facts day and they had to be there on time . As she got nearer to the hotel she saw the family eating bananas and walking down the street with undies  on their heads.She rushed  to the children. ‘WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING? ‘’She shouted.

When they arrived at school the children saw a  monster thumping down the hallway. Mrs Caterpillar following behind them thought  he has the biggest undies just like mine. Hang on she said those undies are mine and she turned a very bright pink on her cheeks.

After  they did their basic facts test then they went home. On the way home she saw the monster following her again. She ran as fast as she could with a flash of fire behind her but she could not escape the monster.At this point she stopped and looked at  the monster and decided as it was not eating her, she would take it home without her family knowing. She slowly went to her room and gave the monster a huge chocolate  bar. They shared the chocolate together and the monster felt really excited to be part of the family because he did not have any friends. Mrs Caterpillar was not happy sharing her house with a monster but he was amazing at doing cartwheels which cheered her up when she was having a bad day. The only problem was hiding him whenever her mother came to visit and her undies which he wanted to wear all the time. She had to buy lots more undies.

 WALT : Hook audience

Mrs Caterpillar was going to sort out that family of late children. It was basic facts day and they had to be there on time . As she got nearer to the hotel she saw the family eating bananas and walking down the street with undies  on their heads.She rushed  to the children. ‘WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING? ‘’She shouted.

When they arrived at school the children saw a  monster thumping down the hallway. Mrs Caterpillar following behind them thought  he has the biggest undies just like mine. Hang on she said those undies are mine and she turned a very bright pink on her cheeks.

After  they did their basic facts test then they went home. On the way home she saw the monster following her again. She ran as fast as she could with a flash of fire behind her but she could not escape the monster.At this point she stopped and looked at  the monster and decided as it was not eating her, she would take it home without her family knowing. She slowly went to her room and gave the monster a huge chocolate  bar. They shared the chocolate together and the monster felt really excited to be part of the family because he did not have any friends. Mrs Caterpillar was not happy sharing her house with a monster but he was amazing at doing cartwheels which cheered her up when she was having a bad day. The only problem was hiding him whenever her mother came to visit and her undies which he wanted to wear all the time. She had to buy lots more undies.

Where Room 7 were born.

Yesterday James come and we did a google map of where everyone born and which Hospital.
So we  made our map and so many of our class was born at Auckland Hospital. Here is my map below feel free to comment.

movie trailers

This term Room 7 have been making book trailers about the book that we have been reading from the
library. Then we had to go find pictures that go with the pictures we had in our heads from our books. Then we had to put our photos onto Imovie and choose out theme we wanted it was so cool. Here is my movie  i hope you like it. Feel free to comment.

My Circuit

On Monday room 7, 8 and 9 went to learn about electrical circuits using a brain box and it was super fun. We had a buddy to build it together and we had the instructions and it was a bit hard then we made another one and it made the police siren was cool.

After that I learned lots of stuff about building with a brain box then we took a photo of the circuit that we made.