This is about the holidays with my friends going to the cinemas and we were watching Boss Baby and we had fun. Also we had to buy lots of snacks for the movies.
Vroom vroom! As I heard the noise I felt excited and my heart was beating. Yes, ultimately we got there and then I saw everyone at the cinemas. Then we got some popcorn for the movie. It is our turn. Hurry. Look it's our turn. We sat down so our movie can start. Shh be quiet remember you can't talk it is a cinemas if you scream they will kick you out before they finish their movie. It began to get sad then happy but we enjoy the bossy baby and they went home and we had a great rest for us because we were so tired when we were watching Bossy Baby.
My writing goal is using punctuation like capitals and full stops. I need to make my story interesting
and also use commas and exclamation marks to make my story better.
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