Mrs Caterpillar

Hi bloggers. As part of our classwork for writing we have been creating cool story starters. We had to be really creative with what we wrote and i tried to be funny so could keep the readers interest. Hope you enjoy please comment.

WALT : Hook my audience

Mrs Caterpillar was going to sort out that family of late children. It was basic facts day and they had to be there on time . As she got nearer to the hotel she saw the family eating bananas and walking down the street with undies  on their heads.She rushed  to the children. ‘WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING? ‘’She shouted.

When they arrived at school the children saw a  monster thumping down the hallway. Mrs Caterpillar following behind them thought  he has the biggest undies just like mine. Hang on she said those undies are mine and she turned a very bright pink on her cheeks.

After  they did their basic facts test then they went home. On the way home she saw the monster following her again. She ran as fast as she could with a flash of fire behind her but she could not escape the monster.At this point she stopped and looked at  the monster and decided as it was not eating her, she would take it home without her family knowing. She slowly went to her room and gave the monster a huge chocolate  bar. They shared the chocolate together and the monster felt really excited to be part of the family because he did not have any friends. Mrs Caterpillar was not happy sharing her house with a monster but he was amazing at doing cartwheels which cheered her up when she was having a bad day. The only problem was hiding him whenever her mother came to visit and her undies which he wanted to wear all the time. She had to buy lots more undies.